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Like Velvet Epilogue
Title: Like Velvet
Pairing: Sihan, ZhouChul, super ninja!KangTeuk and Kid!Henry
Genre: drama, romance, angst, (stripper!Geng) AU
Rating: R (for mature content and themes)
Summary: Hankyung knew no life other than that club where he had to do what he was told, bend over for whoever wanted it, do whatever his clients paid him to do and then one day he meets Siwon and he thinks he'll finally get out. But, Siwon never comes back even though he promised and Hankyung is left alone. Five years later he's out thanks to Heechul and then Siwon comes back..
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shihan_ai and daidetre because I refuse to let her live her life in fear of Sihan.
[Chapter 1] [Chapter 2] [Chapter 3] [Chapter 4] [Chapter 5A] [Chapter 5B] [Chapter 6] [Chapter 7] [Chapter 8] [Chapter 9] [Chapter 10] [Epilogue] [Kyumin Side Story] [Eunhae/HanHae side story]
A/N: So here it is finally. This is the last part to this AU and thanks so much to everyone who has been following this story and thank you so much for the comments. There are still some side stories but this is the epilogue. =/ This AU took me and wrapped me around it's little finger so I hope that at least you all enjoyed it and thank you for all the support. I love you all <3 To Annie: It's over *sobs*Where is my Kyuhan? I hope you liked your fic and I love you!!!
“Gege, I want ice cream!” Henry said running straight for Hankyung’s legs.
“More?” Hankyung asked reaching down to make sure that Henry didn’t trip them both.
“Yes more! Wookie said I can’t eat a whole truck full of ice cream. He says I’ll get sick, but I can!”
Hankyung picked Henry up. “Henry-ah, you can’t eat a truck full of ice cream. You’ll get sick.”
Henry pouted and turned to look at Heechul. “Appa, I can have ice cream right?”
“Of course you can as long as Hankyung is buying.”
“Heechul.”
“What?” Heechul asked. “You were the one who didn’t go pick him up that day. Kids have long memories and they hold grudges. You’re just lucky I’m nice and caring and made an excuse for you otherwise who knows if Henry would be talking to you right now.”
“Henry doesn’t even remember that, it was so long ago. And you know it wasn’t Han Geng’s fault.” Zhou Mi said.
“No, it was my fault.” Siwon said coming to stand next to Hankyung.
They were in Siwon’s house, in his living room to be exact. Zhou Mi and Heechul were sitting on the couch looking up at Hankyung and Henry. Siwon had an arm around Hankyung’s waist and was trying to get Henry to go with him.
“He doesn’t like you Siwon.” Heechul said. “He only likes Chinese men and me and maybe Kyuhyun.”
“Oh! I love Kyuhyun hyung!” Henry said twisting in Hankyung’s arms. “Wookie says that he can sing very well and when we get older he’s going to be in our group and we’ll hold concerts together.”
“Don’t you like me Henry?” Siwon asked resting his chin on Hankyung’s shoulder and looking at the little boy.
Henry turned to Heechul and Zhou Mi. “Am I allowed to say the truth?”
“Of course Henry.” Zhou Mi said. “You know it’s not good to lie.”
“Promise not to get angry at me.”
“I promise.” Zhou Mi said.
“Okay, but I warned you.” Henry sighed turning to Siwon. “I like Han Geng-ge better.”
***
Siwon woke up to the ringing of his cellphone. He reached over but it was just his regular alarm for work that he’d forgotten to turn off. He turned off the phone and threw it somewhere in the direction of the couch.
It was a Saturday and Hankyung was sleeping with his face in the pillow. Siwon looked at the brown hair that was slightly tousled and the relaxed look on Hankyung’s face. He reached over carefully and ran his hand down Hankyung’s cheek.
Siwon still didn’t understand it. He couldn’t understand how he had ended up with this man. He didn’t understand how he had managed to keep Hankyung. He didn’t understand how after everything that had happened, after all of that, Hankyung was still here, still real.
Sometimes it didn’t feel real though. Sometimes like today when it was Hankyung sleeping there next to him, sometimes it didn’t feel real. Sometimes he had to reach over like now and place his hand on Hankyung’s cheek. He ran his hand down that face and leaned over to place a kiss on his cheek.
Siwon watched Hankyung’s eyes flutter open. He waited patiently as Hankyung mumbled sleepily and pulled the covers over his head. Hankyung had had a long day and Siwon knew Hankyung would want to sleep. But, there was a part in him that wanted to wake him up, wanted to be the last person Hankyung saw before sleeping for real, wanted to be the first person Hankyung saw before waking in the morning.
He’d made a vow when Hankyung agreed to move in with him; he’d made a vow that he’d spend the rest of his life making sure that every day was better than the last. Hankyung had been signed in with a performance troupe and Siwon was running his father’s company. He’d come out to the public about his relationship with Hankyung and the world hadn’t exploded…although it had been close, but Heechul and Zhou Mi were there and everything had worked out in the end.
All Siwon could do now was try to make each day better.
Tonight, he had something else to do. One more thing to set aside so that he could finally have the happily ever after. He was going to see Kangin.
He knew that Hankyung would never take another step inside that club ever again, but he remembered Kangin. Kangin had listened to him, understood him and he wanted to tell Kangin something that he had learned. He wanted to tell Kangin that it was worth waiting, that he should wait, wait forever if necessary because Jungsu would come back. How Siwon knew, he wasn’t too sure, but he just felt it.
It was probably his own happiness radiating into things that had nothing to do with him. But, Hankyung was here and Hankyung was real and he would never in those past five years had thought that he would be waking up to this beautiful man every day for the rest of his life. And if he had this then why not Kangin.
He just wanted to say something, be of some help to someone.
Siwon took one more look at Hankyung, placed a kiss on that cheek and grabbed his coat from the closet. He made it halfway across the room when Hankyung spoke.
“Where are you going?”
“I have to go do something before I go to sleep.” Siwon answered turning around.
“What are you going to do? It’s late Siwon. Come back here.”
Siwon knew that he was supposed to answer. He should, but he couldn’t. He couldn’t because the window was open and the light from outside was shining on Hankyung so that half of his body was covered in a pale glow and the other in darkness. He looked even more like a dream then and Siwon had to make sure, had to walk over and make sure that this man was real, was really his.
He walked over, pulled Hankyung into his arms and breathed in the familiar scent of the other man. Real. Here. His.
“I’m going to go see Kangin.”
Hankyung said nothing.
“I want to tell him something.”
“Do you want me to come with you?”
Siwon shook his head. “You don’t want to go back. Stay here and I’ll be back as soon as I can.”
“Alright.” Hankyung said falling back down onto the bed and turning onto his stomach. “Hurry back. It gets cold here at night.”
Siwon ran his fingers through Hankyung’s hair. “I’ll be back.”
Hankyung mumbled something and Siwon knew that meant that he could leave. He practically ran to his car. The thing was the faster he got to where he was going the faster he would be back. He didn’t speed, not with Hankyung waiting for him back at home. He would never do anything stupid, nothing to jeopardize what he had. He was done being stupid.
He parked his car in the street and got out. He walked into the club and it was like a movie replaying in his head. He remembered the sixteen years old, the young boy who ran here every day after school to bring Hankyung a present, to bring him a story. He remembered that last time when he met Kangin.
He walked to the bar like he had that day.
“May I help you?” The bartender asked,
It wasn’t the same face. That wasn’t Kangin.
“I’m sorry.” Siwon said. “I’m looking for Kangin.”
“Kangin?” the bartender asked. “Who’s Kangin?”
“Kangin, he used to work here.” Siwon said wondering for a second whether he had gone to the wrong club. “He was the bartender.”
“Oh, you mean Kim YoungWoon. He doesn’t work here anymore. Left maybe a week ago.”
“Oh.” Siwon said.
He didn’t know why he was suddenly so disappointed, why he felt like he should have come earlier, like maybe he could have done something. He hadn’t thought that Kangin was the type to give up. He’d looked up to Kangin, admired him for waiting, for hoping.
“Have a good night.” Siwon said. “Thanks.”
“Wait a second.” The bartender said. “Do you…are you Siwon?”
“Yes, I am.” Siwon answered. “Why?”
“Here…YoungWoon…Kangin, he left you a letter.”
Siwon took the letter. It was plain white paper with black ink.
I don’t even know if you’ll be back here kid, but I thought I might as well leave this in case you do come back. Don’t give up kid. Don’t give up because it’s worth it. It’s always worth it. Oh and you owe me for that drink. It came out of my paycheck and I’ll be sure to charge you once I get back.
Siwon folded the letter and put it in his pocket.
“Do you know where he went?” he asked already having some idea.
“I don’t know. All I know is that Leeteuk came back and then Kangin disappeared or that’s the story around here anyway.”
Siwon laughed. “Alright, I guess I’ll be going then.”
Happiness was one of the simplest emotions known to human kind. Happiness for yourself, happiness for others, it all worked out to be the same. He was happy. He was happy as he made his way to the door, happy as he stepped outside. He watched the door close behind him as he walked to his car.
You’re not supposed to look back when you close a chapter in your life. You’re not supposed to because there is a reason why you are leaving the past behind you. There is always a reason, but there was a reason for why Siwon looked back.
LIKE VELVET.
Like velvet skin and velvet desire.
The dark purple letters glowed against the black door, almost impossible to make out, almost impossible to see. It had been designed that way so that only those who knew it was there would not miss it.
This club, it was part of his past, part of Hankyung’s.
Hankyung.
That was the reason why Siwon looked back. He looked back because he had met Hankyung there, had loved Hankyung there. It was the past, but sometimes, sometimes it is okay to keep snippets of the past.
Memories.
They were called memories.
Siwon turned around. He got into his car, pulled out his cellphone and dialed the number.
“Hello?” Hankyung’s voice answered. “I’m sorry I’m not here to answer your call—”
“If that’s what your voicemail message sounds like then change it.” Siwon said reveling in the way his heart seemed to want to squeeze out of his chest.
“You don’t like it? Then what should it say President Choi?”
Siwon laughed. “Obviously it should go something like this. Hello this is Choi Hankyung. I am madly in love with Choi Siwon—”
“Madly in love?” Hankyung said and Siwon could hear the laughter in his voice. “Who says I’m madly in love with you? If anything you’re the one who is madly in love with me.”
“Stop talking to Heechul so much.”
“Heechul-ah? But, I love Heechul-ah.”
Siwon said nothing. He listened. He loved listening. He listened to the way Hankyung laughed, the way Hankyung stopped. He listened to the silence and knew that it was a shared silence, a silence for both of them.
“What is it?” Hankyung whispered and Siwon could feel it like a touch.
“I love you.” He said.
He heard the quiet intake of breath. “I know you do.”
Siwon smiled. “Usually when someone says they love you, you’re supposed to say it back.”
“But, who says I love you?”
“I’m serious Geng, stop talking to Heechul.”
“I can’t.” Hankyung answered. “He’s my twin. We can’t live without each other. He and Zhou Mi are moving in next week. Didn’t I tell you? We’re going to have little Henry running all over the house, away from you, but still running.”
“Heechul would never move in with us. He loves his house.” Siwon answered. “And you love me too much to do that to me.”
“Okay.”
There it was again. Silence because there were more words in those moments than any other time.
“I love you.” Hankyung said finally.
“I know.”
“And, we’re going to go over to Zhou Mi and Heechul’s for dinner tomorrow.”
Siwon laughed. He waited until Hankyung hung up the phone and then he put his away. Memories. Memories made and many more to make and he had Hankyung to make them with.
A/N: So that was it and again thanks for everything =)
Pairing: Sihan, ZhouChul, super ninja!KangTeuk and Kid!Henry
Genre: drama, romance, angst, (stripper!Geng) AU
Rating: R (for mature content and themes)
Summary: Hankyung knew no life other than that club where he had to do what he was told, bend over for whoever wanted it, do whatever his clients paid him to do and then one day he meets Siwon and he thinks he'll finally get out. But, Siwon never comes back even though he promised and Hankyung is left alone. Five years later he's out thanks to Heechul and then Siwon comes back..
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shihan_ai and daidetre because I refuse to let her live her life in fear of Sihan.[Chapter 1] [Chapter 2] [Chapter 3] [Chapter 4] [Chapter 5A] [Chapter 5B] [Chapter 6] [Chapter 7] [Chapter 8] [Chapter 9] [Chapter 10] [Epilogue] [Kyumin Side Story] [Eunhae/HanHae side story]
A/N: So here it is finally. This is the last part to this AU and thanks so much to everyone who has been following this story and thank you so much for the comments. There are still some side stories but this is the epilogue. =/ This AU took me and wrapped me around it's little finger so I hope that at least you all enjoyed it and thank you for all the support. I love you all <3 To Annie: It's over *sobs*
“Gege, I want ice cream!” Henry said running straight for Hankyung’s legs.
“More?” Hankyung asked reaching down to make sure that Henry didn’t trip them both.
“Yes more! Wookie said I can’t eat a whole truck full of ice cream. He says I’ll get sick, but I can!”
Hankyung picked Henry up. “Henry-ah, you can’t eat a truck full of ice cream. You’ll get sick.”
Henry pouted and turned to look at Heechul. “Appa, I can have ice cream right?”
“Of course you can as long as Hankyung is buying.”
“Heechul.”
“What?” Heechul asked. “You were the one who didn’t go pick him up that day. Kids have long memories and they hold grudges. You’re just lucky I’m nice and caring and made an excuse for you otherwise who knows if Henry would be talking to you right now.”
“Henry doesn’t even remember that, it was so long ago. And you know it wasn’t Han Geng’s fault.” Zhou Mi said.
“No, it was my fault.” Siwon said coming to stand next to Hankyung.
They were in Siwon’s house, in his living room to be exact. Zhou Mi and Heechul were sitting on the couch looking up at Hankyung and Henry. Siwon had an arm around Hankyung’s waist and was trying to get Henry to go with him.
“He doesn’t like you Siwon.” Heechul said. “He only likes Chinese men and me and maybe Kyuhyun.”
“Oh! I love Kyuhyun hyung!” Henry said twisting in Hankyung’s arms. “Wookie says that he can sing very well and when we get older he’s going to be in our group and we’ll hold concerts together.”
“Don’t you like me Henry?” Siwon asked resting his chin on Hankyung’s shoulder and looking at the little boy.
Henry turned to Heechul and Zhou Mi. “Am I allowed to say the truth?”
“Of course Henry.” Zhou Mi said. “You know it’s not good to lie.”
“Promise not to get angry at me.”
“I promise.” Zhou Mi said.
“Okay, but I warned you.” Henry sighed turning to Siwon. “I like Han Geng-ge better.”
***
Siwon woke up to the ringing of his cellphone. He reached over but it was just his regular alarm for work that he’d forgotten to turn off. He turned off the phone and threw it somewhere in the direction of the couch.
It was a Saturday and Hankyung was sleeping with his face in the pillow. Siwon looked at the brown hair that was slightly tousled and the relaxed look on Hankyung’s face. He reached over carefully and ran his hand down Hankyung’s cheek.
Siwon still didn’t understand it. He couldn’t understand how he had ended up with this man. He didn’t understand how he had managed to keep Hankyung. He didn’t understand how after everything that had happened, after all of that, Hankyung was still here, still real.
Sometimes it didn’t feel real though. Sometimes like today when it was Hankyung sleeping there next to him, sometimes it didn’t feel real. Sometimes he had to reach over like now and place his hand on Hankyung’s cheek. He ran his hand down that face and leaned over to place a kiss on his cheek.
Siwon watched Hankyung’s eyes flutter open. He waited patiently as Hankyung mumbled sleepily and pulled the covers over his head. Hankyung had had a long day and Siwon knew Hankyung would want to sleep. But, there was a part in him that wanted to wake him up, wanted to be the last person Hankyung saw before sleeping for real, wanted to be the first person Hankyung saw before waking in the morning.
He’d made a vow when Hankyung agreed to move in with him; he’d made a vow that he’d spend the rest of his life making sure that every day was better than the last. Hankyung had been signed in with a performance troupe and Siwon was running his father’s company. He’d come out to the public about his relationship with Hankyung and the world hadn’t exploded…although it had been close, but Heechul and Zhou Mi were there and everything had worked out in the end.
All Siwon could do now was try to make each day better.
Tonight, he had something else to do. One more thing to set aside so that he could finally have the happily ever after. He was going to see Kangin.
He knew that Hankyung would never take another step inside that club ever again, but he remembered Kangin. Kangin had listened to him, understood him and he wanted to tell Kangin something that he had learned. He wanted to tell Kangin that it was worth waiting, that he should wait, wait forever if necessary because Jungsu would come back. How Siwon knew, he wasn’t too sure, but he just felt it.
It was probably his own happiness radiating into things that had nothing to do with him. But, Hankyung was here and Hankyung was real and he would never in those past five years had thought that he would be waking up to this beautiful man every day for the rest of his life. And if he had this then why not Kangin.
He just wanted to say something, be of some help to someone.
Siwon took one more look at Hankyung, placed a kiss on that cheek and grabbed his coat from the closet. He made it halfway across the room when Hankyung spoke.
“Where are you going?”
“I have to go do something before I go to sleep.” Siwon answered turning around.
“What are you going to do? It’s late Siwon. Come back here.”
Siwon knew that he was supposed to answer. He should, but he couldn’t. He couldn’t because the window was open and the light from outside was shining on Hankyung so that half of his body was covered in a pale glow and the other in darkness. He looked even more like a dream then and Siwon had to make sure, had to walk over and make sure that this man was real, was really his.
He walked over, pulled Hankyung into his arms and breathed in the familiar scent of the other man. Real. Here. His.
“I’m going to go see Kangin.”
Hankyung said nothing.
“I want to tell him something.”
“Do you want me to come with you?”
Siwon shook his head. “You don’t want to go back. Stay here and I’ll be back as soon as I can.”
“Alright.” Hankyung said falling back down onto the bed and turning onto his stomach. “Hurry back. It gets cold here at night.”
Siwon ran his fingers through Hankyung’s hair. “I’ll be back.”
Hankyung mumbled something and Siwon knew that meant that he could leave. He practically ran to his car. The thing was the faster he got to where he was going the faster he would be back. He didn’t speed, not with Hankyung waiting for him back at home. He would never do anything stupid, nothing to jeopardize what he had. He was done being stupid.
He parked his car in the street and got out. He walked into the club and it was like a movie replaying in his head. He remembered the sixteen years old, the young boy who ran here every day after school to bring Hankyung a present, to bring him a story. He remembered that last time when he met Kangin.
He walked to the bar like he had that day.
“May I help you?” The bartender asked,
It wasn’t the same face. That wasn’t Kangin.
“I’m sorry.” Siwon said. “I’m looking for Kangin.”
“Kangin?” the bartender asked. “Who’s Kangin?”
“Kangin, he used to work here.” Siwon said wondering for a second whether he had gone to the wrong club. “He was the bartender.”
“Oh, you mean Kim YoungWoon. He doesn’t work here anymore. Left maybe a week ago.”
“Oh.” Siwon said.
He didn’t know why he was suddenly so disappointed, why he felt like he should have come earlier, like maybe he could have done something. He hadn’t thought that Kangin was the type to give up. He’d looked up to Kangin, admired him for waiting, for hoping.
“Have a good night.” Siwon said. “Thanks.”
“Wait a second.” The bartender said. “Do you…are you Siwon?”
“Yes, I am.” Siwon answered. “Why?”
“Here…YoungWoon…Kangin, he left you a letter.”
Siwon took the letter. It was plain white paper with black ink.
I don’t even know if you’ll be back here kid, but I thought I might as well leave this in case you do come back. Don’t give up kid. Don’t give up because it’s worth it. It’s always worth it. Oh and you owe me for that drink. It came out of my paycheck and I’ll be sure to charge you once I get back.
Siwon folded the letter and put it in his pocket.
“Do you know where he went?” he asked already having some idea.
“I don’t know. All I know is that Leeteuk came back and then Kangin disappeared or that’s the story around here anyway.”
Siwon laughed. “Alright, I guess I’ll be going then.”
Happiness was one of the simplest emotions known to human kind. Happiness for yourself, happiness for others, it all worked out to be the same. He was happy. He was happy as he made his way to the door, happy as he stepped outside. He watched the door close behind him as he walked to his car.
You’re not supposed to look back when you close a chapter in your life. You’re not supposed to because there is a reason why you are leaving the past behind you. There is always a reason, but there was a reason for why Siwon looked back.
LIKE VELVET.
Like velvet skin and velvet desire.
The dark purple letters glowed against the black door, almost impossible to make out, almost impossible to see. It had been designed that way so that only those who knew it was there would not miss it.
This club, it was part of his past, part of Hankyung’s.
Hankyung.
That was the reason why Siwon looked back. He looked back because he had met Hankyung there, had loved Hankyung there. It was the past, but sometimes, sometimes it is okay to keep snippets of the past.
Memories.
They were called memories.
Siwon turned around. He got into his car, pulled out his cellphone and dialed the number.
“Hello?” Hankyung’s voice answered. “I’m sorry I’m not here to answer your call—”
“If that’s what your voicemail message sounds like then change it.” Siwon said reveling in the way his heart seemed to want to squeeze out of his chest.
“You don’t like it? Then what should it say President Choi?”
Siwon laughed. “Obviously it should go something like this. Hello this is Choi Hankyung. I am madly in love with Choi Siwon—”
“Madly in love?” Hankyung said and Siwon could hear the laughter in his voice. “Who says I’m madly in love with you? If anything you’re the one who is madly in love with me.”
“Stop talking to Heechul so much.”
“Heechul-ah? But, I love Heechul-ah.”
Siwon said nothing. He listened. He loved listening. He listened to the way Hankyung laughed, the way Hankyung stopped. He listened to the silence and knew that it was a shared silence, a silence for both of them.
“What is it?” Hankyung whispered and Siwon could feel it like a touch.
“I love you.” He said.
He heard the quiet intake of breath. “I know you do.”
Siwon smiled. “Usually when someone says they love you, you’re supposed to say it back.”
“But, who says I love you?”
“I’m serious Geng, stop talking to Heechul.”
“I can’t.” Hankyung answered. “He’s my twin. We can’t live without each other. He and Zhou Mi are moving in next week. Didn’t I tell you? We’re going to have little Henry running all over the house, away from you, but still running.”
“Heechul would never move in with us. He loves his house.” Siwon answered. “And you love me too much to do that to me.”
“Okay.”
There it was again. Silence because there were more words in those moments than any other time.
“I love you.” Hankyung said finally.
“I know.”
“And, we’re going to go over to Zhou Mi and Heechul’s for dinner tomorrow.”
Siwon laughed. He waited until Hankyung hung up the phone and then he put his away. Memories. Memories made and many more to make and he had Hankyung to make them with.
A/N: So that was it and again thanks for everything =)
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gosh it's finished and it feels like we've been on a journey. they've come so far since the beginning, where geng was trapped and siwon was suffering and heechul was helpless, kyuhyun fighting to make sungmin understand his feelings, for sungmin to stop lying to himself.
geng is free and in love and siwon is with the man he's always wanted to be with, kyuhyun and sungmin have overcome their hurdles and even youngwoon has found his lost love again.
this was such a beautiful fic, ana, i love it and i love you <3
(and kasjdfaklsdj my muse has deserted me okay so kyuhan is like stuck D:)
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Oh I'm so happy for Sihan... I never thought I'd be saying that xD But I am!
And ahaha, Heechul holds a grudge like no other. Hanchul twins for the ever-loving win! I'm gonna miss the ZhouChul and their ickle Henry *cuddles them all* But, yay for Sihan love!
The boys have come along way and it's good that Siwon has finally grown up enough to live his own happy life with Hankyung.
This fic was amazing and awesome and it progressed beautifully.
Thank you so much for writing it.
And the shocking thing is... I'm now gonna start a Sihan oneshot with a broken hearted Chul .__. And I actually want to do it. The fuck? I'm a bad petal :/
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a perfect ending to a perfect series :)
DO I SEE SOME TINNY BIT OF... HANCHUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????? 8DDD
yay! teukie came back for kangin!!! :D
and sihan is happy, thats all that matters :) together forever~
i can get over the hangeng and heechul are twins! xD HANCHUL!!!! <333
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ommmmmmmoooooo.... who said i love you..??....Geng you are such a tease....kekekeke.....*giggles*..
OMFG.....SIHAN interaction....*faints*...ommmmooo why am always fainting after reading fluffy sihan fics....i think am too overly excited...*smiles*...
*Hands you cookies*.......i love this....and take care.....Hwaiting....
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Soooo loveable.....
I love the telephone conversation....
;A;
I'm sobbing happiness sobs....
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And Henry's honesty *squish* ....
Just love love love this story ... sad to see it end, but there's many more stories to be made/written as well...
<33333
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Leeteuk and Kangin got together, Siwon and Hangeng are happy, and Heechul and Zhoumi are happy, and Sungmin and Kyuhyun are happy~! and you know Wookie and Henry are gonna be happy~!
you should make a story about them when they're older~!ohhhh, i loved this story. sad to see it's over, but i'm glad it ended well ^^
i look forward to more work from you~! :3
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Yes KANGTEUK! I couldn't not have the KangTeuk. I love the umma and appa of super junior! Everyone is happy!
I'll see what I can do about the HenWook!
Thank you so much for reading and for sticking with this fic and me <3
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Thanks for reading and commenting and sticking with this fic!
Yes! Leeteuk! and Kangin! And yes I am writing the KangTeuk back story to this fic! I'll post it soon I promise.
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I love the ending with kangin. i mean, it leaves so much to think ---what happened, how it happened, how it turned out, what they're doing--okay, maybe a lot, but yeah. me craving more.....(i also think there should be a oneshot sidestory to go with it but that's just my opinion no need to listen to me) but it's adorable.
and sihan's conversation at the end... heechul and hangeng twins. HAHAHAHAA. THEY COULD BE.... haahha in a sense. your sihan is amazing.
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Yes there is still so much that isn't told in this story but that's the fun part because then i get to write these side stories and that makes me very happy XD
There is already a Kyumin side story and I am going to have a KangTeuk side story and a eunhae/hanhae probably a qmi/zhouchul one too and sdhfjsd I just...I am so addicted to this AU
Thank you so much. <3333
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i don't know what to say more....they''re overall incredibly cute!!!!!!love this...and love you!!!!!!!write mooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrr..........(and the smutt too?teehee/is smacked again)
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Thank you so much and i am so glad that you liked it! Yes little henry!!!
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Henry is so sweet! :3
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww, Sihan <33333
And OMG, Kangin! And Kangteuk!!! ^^
Happiness was one of the simplest emotions known to human kind. Happiness for yourself, happiness for others, it all worked out to be the same. He was happy. He was happy as he made his way to the door, happy as he stepped outside. He watched the door close behind him as he walked to his car.
You’re not supposed to look back when you close a chapter in your life. You’re not supposed to because there is a reason why you are leaving the past behind you. There is always a reason, but there was a reason for why Siwon looked back.
LIKE VELVET.
Like velvet skin and velvet desire.
This is the bestest part ever! *tearing*
I AM SO HAPPY AFTER READING THIS!
I loved this story so much that I'm gonna miss this. T_____T
I love your stories! I love them! I love all your fics!
I admire you so much! You're better writer than me. I LOVE YOU!
You're the best.
♥
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*hugs you forever*
Thank you so much and I don't know how to make a heart like the one you made so <3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
AND NO YOU ARE THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I love their phone convo. Tht wuz priceless. XDXD
AND YAYYYYY HAPPY ENDING FOR KANGIN TOO :D
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I love this line: "“He’s my twin. We can’t live without each other. He and Zhou Mi are moving in next week. Didn’t I tell you? We’re going to have little Henry running all over the house, away from you, but still running.”
LOL
I'm glad you wrote this and I loved it all! :)
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XD the hanchul! I couldn't resist them. I never can. I love them so much!
Thank you so much and I had so much fun writing it because it practically wrote itself but thank you so much for staying with me and let me go and write you more It's High School =)
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there was a part in him that wanted to wake him up, wanted to be the last person Hankyung saw before sleeping for real, wanted to be the first person Hankyung saw before waking in the morning. YES, SIWON, YES, BE THAT PERSON, LOVE GENG AND MAKE SOME LITTLE SIHANS <3
He would never do anything stupid, nothing to jeopardize what he had. MY FAVORITE LINE! /approves
WHY ARE YOU SO AWESOME?! THIS AU IS JUST LOVELY, SIHAN IS LOVE AND, OMG, I JUST WANT TO SQUEEZE YOU AND SIHAN <3
Side stories? WHAT SIDE STORIES?! ME WANTS!!
and more SiHan for you to love <3
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and kangin found leeteuk again :D wonder what's the story there but yay for happy endings :D
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I had to have a nice ending because I couldn't leave it hanging like that.
Thank you so much for reading and sticking with this fic <3
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Omona Omona omonaaaaaa!!!!! >_< This epilogue was just so so so...freaking perfect!!!!! I couldnt even begin to imagine a better ending!!! And Omg, Henry why are you such a cutie pie *huggles*
The kangteuk finally happened!!! Yay kangin!!!! ^^ Zhoumi is as awesome as ever :P heechul, you are one badass man lady lmaooooooo
Hangeng and heechul as twins? 0__o lol I couldn't have said it better!!! Bff to the max!!! That dinner is going to be a blast!!!
That phone Convo was daebak!!!! I'm just loving the Sihan luuuurrrrvvvvvveeeeeeeee :D so excited that they're finally together ;) and getting their freak Oooooonnnnnnn :P
I'm totally eager to read those side fics because your story was pure win!!!! Hwaiting!!!! ^^ <3<3<3
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so happy that you thought it was perfect <3 *is flattered* Thank you so much for reading and commenting and not abandoning me XD YES HENRY IS ADORABLE!!!!!!
ahahahaa man lady ahahahaa <3 yes Heechul is =) And yay celebration for the KangTeuk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *throws them a party* Of course you're invited to come and join in the KangTeuk celebration <3
<3333333333 jhjlkdhfasldk I love that you loved this so much! Thank you really I am so happy like you would not believe!
Thank you so much and I am working on the KangTeuk side story right now =) And thank you so much (i keep saying this don't i? XD) it's just I am so happy and flattered that you are eager to read the side stories. Thank you
*tears*
*runs at you and hugs you* <333
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*speechless* it closes the sotry SO WELL! I love how domestic they are, so used to each other, I adore it!
You write so well baby (you have my genes LOL)
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*hugs* I am so glad you liked it! `YAY!!! I am so glad you liked it! <3
XD And yes of course I have your genes =) Thank you so much for the writing genes <3
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I am glad that you liked it and thanks so much for reading.
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This is such a nice piece to read. When I first read the summary, I was not expecting much. To say the least,. I was expecting one of those typical rich guy falls for a prostitute plot. It really is. But iI think your style and complications in the plot added up some spice in that framework.
When I read the first paragraphs, I said to myself, it was beautifully written. But being good with words does not make a good story alone. It must have substance. Yes, this story really is meaningful, although I find some of the meanings vague. Ironically, I think another thing that I like about this story is that there are parts that I don’t understand. It feels like there are some hidden themes behind the words.
I think this fic has given its focus more in the portrayal of emotions with all those long paragraphs of dreaming and waiting and blah blah blah. Although sometimes, I felt the whole story is going in circles. Unfortunately though, it did not make me tear up somehow. I don’t know if it is a good thing or a bad thing. To be completely honest, I find myself bored in some angst parts. Instead, I admire greatly the interaction of the characters. I like the structure of their relationships and how intertwined they are.
And the lines! The lines individually does not give much impact to me. I couldn’t find something quotable. It is the whole conversation that is powerful; how this certain character throws this, while this other character answered with this, and so on and so forth. It’s not out of this world, but it’s also not something I would normally hear everyday.
Although I must say, I do hope there are more elements in the story you could had touched more. Like perhaps the character development of Hankyung to his growth and being more independent. I think it was portrayed well. But at the same time, I felt like there is something missing. Personally, I would have loved it to read the process of his character development more in detail. But of course, I’m bias about because that is my favorite theme that emerged in this story. And also, the bizarre relationship of Siwon’s family, I think it will be very interesting to touch those waters, especially Siwon’s mother’s characterization, which I must say, I think a favorite character of mine. She’s rather unique and her history just added more flavor to the typical mother antagonist. But then again, this is a love story…
I’ll still say, that this story is something that I had read before. But at the same time, it is something I haven’t.. All in all, the job was done fantastically.
And lastly, I hope you have a good day. And thankz for this story.
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When I was writing this I didn't aim for originality (I didn't want the typical rich guy falls for prostitute but I did want to keep some of the main points the same.) In my writing, (the ones I do everyday and not fanfiction) I tend to lean towards emotions. I write short stories and that always works well there because there is not much going on in a short story. I do see your point as to why this is a problem here and I appreciate that you pointed it out because I hadn't noticed.
The character development was a bit rushed I admit to that. I did want it to be longer and would have liked to have touched on that more, but things got in the way (every day life, mother, college).
I do want to say that I am thankful for the comment because it does what a comment in supposed to do. It points out what could be better and I thank you again for that. This is something I will take into account for the next story. Thank you again and I am glad that you enjoyed the story.
I wish you a good day too and thank you for reading and commenting.
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so I read all the chapters together
I looked like a crazy person pouting , juming , imagining , dance , angry all at the same time
the mood change in every fic I read
anyway I want to say good job really good job for writing it it's all prefectly written Honey
and waiting for you other fic in the future
*kiss and huges*
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*hugs back*
Thank you so much!!!
I am very flattered dear thanks. <3
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i've been following this fic since the beginning,n only decides to leave a comment now...well i can't resist myself from doing so...it's ur fault (point at the author) for making such a beautiful story...
it's soo sad ( try reading this with the image of hankyung from the mv ' i will' by zhang li yin...u know what i mean..)
anyways...*wipe tears* i hope u can come up with something much better in the future...
i love u...*hugs u tight* probably coz hankyung is my bias too...
hwaiting!!!
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There, there,
O: *takes blame* Thank you very much for reading the fic. I am glad that you thought it was nice. I intended for it to be sad. It was...author's tend to take out their frustration on their poor stories =/ I know what you mean.
I will try to do better.
Thank you very much. <33333333 *hugs you back*
WAIT! You said HanGeng is your bias!? *pulls you over to my side* GAH!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!! I found you! Another Geng person <333333333333 *showers you with love forever*