This is probably one of the best fanfiction I had read in a while.
This is such a nice piece to read. When I first read the summary, I was not expecting much. To say the least,. I was expecting one of those typical rich guy falls for a prostitute plot. It really is. But iI think your style and complications in the plot added up some spice in that framework.
When I read the first paragraphs, I said to myself, it was beautifully written. But being good with words does not make a good story alone. It must have substance. Yes, this story really is meaningful, although I find some of the meanings vague. Ironically, I think another thing that I like about this story is that there are parts that I don’t understand. It feels like there are some hidden themes behind the words.
I think this fic has given its focus more in the portrayal of emotions with all those long paragraphs of dreaming and waiting and blah blah blah. Although sometimes, I felt the whole story is going in circles. Unfortunately though, it did not make me tear up somehow. I don’t know if it is a good thing or a bad thing. To be completely honest, I find myself bored in some angst parts. Instead, I admire greatly the interaction of the characters. I like the structure of their relationships and how intertwined they are.
And the lines! The lines individually does not give much impact to me. I couldn’t find something quotable. It is the whole conversation that is powerful; how this certain character throws this, while this other character answered with this, and so on and so forth. It’s not out of this world, but it’s also not something I would normally hear everyday.
Although I must say, I do hope there are more elements in the story you could had touched more. Like perhaps the character development of Hankyung to his growth and being more independent. I think it was portrayed well. But at the same time, I felt like there is something missing. Personally, I would have loved it to read the process of his character development more in detail. But of course, I’m bias about because that is my favorite theme that emerged in this story. And also, the bizarre relationship of Siwon’s family, I think it will be very interesting to touch those waters, especially Siwon’s mother’s characterization, which I must say, I think a favorite character of mine. She’s rather unique and her history just added more flavor to the typical mother antagonist. But then again, this is a love story…
I’ll still say, that this story is something that I had read before. But at the same time, it is something I haven’t.. All in all, the job was done fantastically.
And lastly, I hope you have a good day. And thankz for this story.
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This is such a nice piece to read. When I first read the summary, I was not expecting much. To say the least,. I was expecting one of those typical rich guy falls for a prostitute plot. It really is. But iI think your style and complications in the plot added up some spice in that framework.
When I read the first paragraphs, I said to myself, it was beautifully written. But being good with words does not make a good story alone. It must have substance. Yes, this story really is meaningful, although I find some of the meanings vague. Ironically, I think another thing that I like about this story is that there are parts that I don’t understand. It feels like there are some hidden themes behind the words.
I think this fic has given its focus more in the portrayal of emotions with all those long paragraphs of dreaming and waiting and blah blah blah. Although sometimes, I felt the whole story is going in circles. Unfortunately though, it did not make me tear up somehow. I don’t know if it is a good thing or a bad thing. To be completely honest, I find myself bored in some angst parts. Instead, I admire greatly the interaction of the characters. I like the structure of their relationships and how intertwined they are.
And the lines! The lines individually does not give much impact to me. I couldn’t find something quotable. It is the whole conversation that is powerful; how this certain character throws this, while this other character answered with this, and so on and so forth. It’s not out of this world, but it’s also not something I would normally hear everyday.
Although I must say, I do hope there are more elements in the story you could had touched more. Like perhaps the character development of Hankyung to his growth and being more independent. I think it was portrayed well. But at the same time, I felt like there is something missing. Personally, I would have loved it to read the process of his character development more in detail. But of course, I’m bias about because that is my favorite theme that emerged in this story. And also, the bizarre relationship of Siwon’s family, I think it will be very interesting to touch those waters, especially Siwon’s mother’s characterization, which I must say, I think a favorite character of mine. She’s rather unique and her history just added more flavor to the typical mother antagonist. But then again, this is a love story…
I’ll still say, that this story is something that I had read before. But at the same time, it is something I haven’t.. All in all, the job was done fantastically.
And lastly, I hope you have a good day. And thankz for this story.