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A/N: Hey there guys. Here I am again with the last part of this fic. Thank you so much to all the people who commented. I was really happy at the response to the story. So, here's the last chapter for all you guys who are super awesome. Comments are <3!
"Eunhyuk? Eunhyuk!"
Eunhyuk woke from his daze as Yesung shoved his off his chair.
"What?" he asked looking up at both his friends.
"I've heard rumors Eunhyuk." Hankyung said pulling Eunhyuk up.
"Yeah, I know. How was I supposed to know that Yoona was going to come back?"
"So there was something there?" Yesung asked shoving Eunhyuk off the chair again.
"I don't know." he said wrapping his arms around himself.
"Do you want there to be something?" Hankyung asked looking at Eunhyuk carefully.
"I don't know."
Eunhyuk sighed. Was there anything between him and Donghae? Perhaps or perhaps not. Did he want there to be anything?
He thought about Donghae, about that hair that was even softer than it looked, about those big brown eyes that could look so adorable, about that expression that was adorable, about the soft sighs, the taste of his lips, his strong arms.
Did he want something between him and Donghae?
"Yes I do." Eunhyuk said.
He was afraid to look up. He knew that Heechul and Hankyung had all but hit each other. He knew that the only reason Yesung wasn't stripped of his innocence was because he was too innocent and Hankyung was too careful. He knew that F3 hated the Golden Boys and he knew that Donghae was F3. But, he couldn't help it.
It had been Donghae who had started everything that day at the dance studio. It had been Donghae who pulled away. Donghae who now ignored him. And Eunhyuk was sick of it. He was sick of waking up at night thinking of Donghae. He was tired of being so careful when they went to their dance club. He was tired of everyone hanging on his arm. He was tired of all the flirting. He wanted the warmth of Donghae's arms and the security of his embrace.
"Eunhyuk, it's okay." Hankyung said sitting next to him and putting an arm around his shoulders. "It's okay to want. You don't have to be afraid of it."
Eunhyuk leaned into his hyung's embrace. "Do you ever want?"
Hankyung leaned his chin on Eunhyuk's shoulder. "I do want and I tend to want what's not good for me. But Donghae is not a bad choice. He's better than his friends. Better than hateful Heechul and seductive Ryeowook."
Eunhyuk laughed. Hankyung was right. Donghae had been friendly from the beginning. He had never done anything to him or his friends.
"Hey! What about me? I feel left out." Yesung called.
They laughed and Hankyung put his other arm around Yesung when he sat next to them on the floor. Eunhyuk loved the feeling he got as the three sat together. Hankyung took over the role of protecting them too much. There should be someone to protect him, especially since his family was so far away. And Yesung deserved someone as good as he was.
"What should I do?" Eunhyuk asked finally.
"Well, I don't know about you Eunhyuk, but Yesung and I are going to practice our singing. We'll see you later, but we sincerely hope you'll be too busy with your dancing."
"Thank you." Eunhyuk said as his friends waved.
Eunhyuk made his was over to the dance studio. He hadn't seen Donghae all day. When he got to the dance studio it was surprisingly empty. Only Donghae was sitting on the bleachers with his usual sunglasses.
"Dance club's cancelled for today."
"Why?" Eunhyuk asked.
"Because," Donghae started, stepping down. “I’m tired of watching guys and girls all over you. And I'm especially tired of hearing Yoona's voice. You shouldn't let her touch you like that...unless, of course, you like it."
Eunhyuk found it hard to swallow. Donghae's eyes were dangerously dark.
"Do you?" Donghae asked his voice hard.
"Do I what?" Eunhyuk asked slightly confused.
His mind had blanked out after Donghae had stepped down from the bleachers. All he could hear was Donghae's hard voice and hope that it was jealousy that darkened Donghae's eyes.
"Don't play with me Eunhyuk." Donghae grounded out pushing Eunhyuk against the wall.
"Play?" Eunhyuk asked smartly.
"I'm going to ask you one more time. Do you..."
But, Donghae never got to finish. Eunhyuk silenced him with his lips. It was on impulse, something he did just because he wanted to see what it would be like. He wanted to know if there was anything there, if he hadn't imagined what he felt the first time. He wanted to know if Donghae really meant what he said.
"You're mine." Donghae whispered when they broke their kiss.
Eunhyuk laughed, but Donghae placed his hands on the side of his face and made Eunhyuk look at him. The look in those brown eyes was enough to make Eunhyuk be quiet. There was something there, something he wasn't really sure he was seeing.
Could Donghae possibly really, truly, honestly, want them to try this? Was the school's rich leader going to bow down to a scholarship student? Was Lee Donghae, the most sought after guy in the school, F3's leader, really going to do this? Was Eunhyuk that worth it?
It wasn't that Eunhyuk was putting himself down. He just never really saw the divisions until now. Before Donghae, Eunhyuk thought that once he liked someone who liked him back, it would be easy. But, this wasn't easy. This was Donghae and Donghae was someone else, someone Eunhyuk would have never talked to, never met if it hadn't been for this school. So, was this really something they should try?
They were different in terms of upbringing. While Eunhyuk worked, Donghae probably just ordered his servants around. While Eunhyuk studied hard to get where he was, Donghae just asked his father for permission. While Eunhyuk could be kicked out at any time if he didn't do well, Donghae would be forever protected.
How could the two of them possibly work out? The answer?
They couldn't.
"I don't think..." Eunhyuk started. "I don't think this is going to work out. I'm sorry. You should probably find someone else more suited to who you are."
He turned away, because there was really nothing he could do. He walked away because that was Donghae and he was Eunhyuk and they were too different. But, he never got far. A hand on his arm stopped him and turned him around.
"I don't want you wanting anybody else. Do you understand?" Donghae asked him. "I like you. I want to know if what I feel now can really be something. I don't really want anyone else."
Eunhyuk nodded because really what else could he do? He liked Donghae too and why not? He could give it a try and see where things went.
"As long as you're willing to try." Eunhyuk said.
"I want to try." Donghae said silencing Eunhyuk's next comment with another kiss.
A/N: So, one more thing before I leave you guys. Now that this fic is done, I want to address something that most of you have been asking about. So, this story is part of a three part fic. So there will be a Yewook part and a Hanchul part to this. The next part I'm putting up is the Yewook then Hanchul. After those are done, there is still another part. Basically Eunhae, Yewook and Hanchul are a prologue to a really large fic I have. You guys just need to read these before I can post up the other one. Be warned this is a really long AU. So, if you liked it and want to read more, then you will get more, so much more that it might scare you =) Anyway, thanks for the comments as always and a special thanks to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
pjvj10 because she secretly got to read them all first and she was the one who introduced me to livejournal. And don't run to her to tell you what happens because she's not telling. =)
"Eunhyuk? Eunhyuk!"
Eunhyuk woke from his daze as Yesung shoved his off his chair.
"What?" he asked looking up at both his friends.
"I've heard rumors Eunhyuk." Hankyung said pulling Eunhyuk up.
"Yeah, I know. How was I supposed to know that Yoona was going to come back?"
"So there was something there?" Yesung asked shoving Eunhyuk off the chair again.
"I don't know." he said wrapping his arms around himself.
"Do you want there to be something?" Hankyung asked looking at Eunhyuk carefully.
"I don't know."
Eunhyuk sighed. Was there anything between him and Donghae? Perhaps or perhaps not. Did he want there to be anything?
He thought about Donghae, about that hair that was even softer than it looked, about those big brown eyes that could look so adorable, about that expression that was adorable, about the soft sighs, the taste of his lips, his strong arms.
Did he want something between him and Donghae?
"Yes I do." Eunhyuk said.
He was afraid to look up. He knew that Heechul and Hankyung had all but hit each other. He knew that the only reason Yesung wasn't stripped of his innocence was because he was too innocent and Hankyung was too careful. He knew that F3 hated the Golden Boys and he knew that Donghae was F3. But, he couldn't help it.
It had been Donghae who had started everything that day at the dance studio. It had been Donghae who pulled away. Donghae who now ignored him. And Eunhyuk was sick of it. He was sick of waking up at night thinking of Donghae. He was tired of being so careful when they went to their dance club. He was tired of everyone hanging on his arm. He was tired of all the flirting. He wanted the warmth of Donghae's arms and the security of his embrace.
"Eunhyuk, it's okay." Hankyung said sitting next to him and putting an arm around his shoulders. "It's okay to want. You don't have to be afraid of it."
Eunhyuk leaned into his hyung's embrace. "Do you ever want?"
Hankyung leaned his chin on Eunhyuk's shoulder. "I do want and I tend to want what's not good for me. But Donghae is not a bad choice. He's better than his friends. Better than hateful Heechul and seductive Ryeowook."
Eunhyuk laughed. Hankyung was right. Donghae had been friendly from the beginning. He had never done anything to him or his friends.
"Hey! What about me? I feel left out." Yesung called.
They laughed and Hankyung put his other arm around Yesung when he sat next to them on the floor. Eunhyuk loved the feeling he got as the three sat together. Hankyung took over the role of protecting them too much. There should be someone to protect him, especially since his family was so far away. And Yesung deserved someone as good as he was.
"What should I do?" Eunhyuk asked finally.
"Well, I don't know about you Eunhyuk, but Yesung and I are going to practice our singing. We'll see you later, but we sincerely hope you'll be too busy with your dancing."
"Thank you." Eunhyuk said as his friends waved.
Eunhyuk made his was over to the dance studio. He hadn't seen Donghae all day. When he got to the dance studio it was surprisingly empty. Only Donghae was sitting on the bleachers with his usual sunglasses.
"Dance club's cancelled for today."
"Why?" Eunhyuk asked.
"Because," Donghae started, stepping down. “I’m tired of watching guys and girls all over you. And I'm especially tired of hearing Yoona's voice. You shouldn't let her touch you like that...unless, of course, you like it."
Eunhyuk found it hard to swallow. Donghae's eyes were dangerously dark.
"Do you?" Donghae asked his voice hard.
"Do I what?" Eunhyuk asked slightly confused.
His mind had blanked out after Donghae had stepped down from the bleachers. All he could hear was Donghae's hard voice and hope that it was jealousy that darkened Donghae's eyes.
"Don't play with me Eunhyuk." Donghae grounded out pushing Eunhyuk against the wall.
"Play?" Eunhyuk asked smartly.
"I'm going to ask you one more time. Do you..."
But, Donghae never got to finish. Eunhyuk silenced him with his lips. It was on impulse, something he did just because he wanted to see what it would be like. He wanted to know if there was anything there, if he hadn't imagined what he felt the first time. He wanted to know if Donghae really meant what he said.
"You're mine." Donghae whispered when they broke their kiss.
Eunhyuk laughed, but Donghae placed his hands on the side of his face and made Eunhyuk look at him. The look in those brown eyes was enough to make Eunhyuk be quiet. There was something there, something he wasn't really sure he was seeing.
Could Donghae possibly really, truly, honestly, want them to try this? Was the school's rich leader going to bow down to a scholarship student? Was Lee Donghae, the most sought after guy in the school, F3's leader, really going to do this? Was Eunhyuk that worth it?
It wasn't that Eunhyuk was putting himself down. He just never really saw the divisions until now. Before Donghae, Eunhyuk thought that once he liked someone who liked him back, it would be easy. But, this wasn't easy. This was Donghae and Donghae was someone else, someone Eunhyuk would have never talked to, never met if it hadn't been for this school. So, was this really something they should try?
They were different in terms of upbringing. While Eunhyuk worked, Donghae probably just ordered his servants around. While Eunhyuk studied hard to get where he was, Donghae just asked his father for permission. While Eunhyuk could be kicked out at any time if he didn't do well, Donghae would be forever protected.
How could the two of them possibly work out? The answer?
They couldn't.
"I don't think..." Eunhyuk started. "I don't think this is going to work out. I'm sorry. You should probably find someone else more suited to who you are."
He turned away, because there was really nothing he could do. He walked away because that was Donghae and he was Eunhyuk and they were too different. But, he never got far. A hand on his arm stopped him and turned him around.
"I don't want you wanting anybody else. Do you understand?" Donghae asked him. "I like you. I want to know if what I feel now can really be something. I don't really want anyone else."
Eunhyuk nodded because really what else could he do? He liked Donghae too and why not? He could give it a try and see where things went.
"As long as you're willing to try." Eunhyuk said.
"I want to try." Donghae said silencing Eunhyuk's next comment with another kiss.
A/N: So, one more thing before I leave you guys. Now that this fic is done, I want to address something that most of you have been asking about. So, this story is part of a three part fic. So there will be a Yewook part and a Hanchul part to this. The next part I'm putting up is the Yewook then Hanchul. After those are done, there is still another part. Basically Eunhae, Yewook and Hanchul are a prologue to a really large fic I have. You guys just need to read these before I can post up the other one. Be warned this is a really long AU. So, if you liked it and want to read more, then you will get more, so much more that it might scare you =) Anyway, thanks for the comments as always and a special thanks to
pjvj10 because she secretly got to read them all first and she was the one who introduced me to livejournal. And don't run to her to tell you what happens because she's not telling. =)
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Glad that you're back. Yay =)
Thanks for coming to read. And yes, I will post them up. If you want to know a secret, I have the fic done, so when I say that I'll post up almost, maybe, daily, then you can be sure I will. If you come back not tomorrow, but the day after the first part of Yewook should be up.
Thanks again and glad that you're looking forward to it. <3
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Yay! =) Come back day after tomorrow for the first part of Yewook. Ah love your icon. Donghae+puppy= adorable beyond belief.
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Thanks for the comment and glad you're happy. =)
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I will anticipate the rest of the story! good job on the writing and Hwaiting!!
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Thank you very much and I'm glad to hear that you want more. That makes me really happy. Thank you for reading and I hope to see you in the future. Yewook is next the day after tomorrow.
Thanks for commenting. <3
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so lovely! hyuk is yours hae! XP
thx for the update! ^^
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glad to know you liked it and yes of course HYUK AND HAE forever!
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It's okay. Don't worry about it. This comment makes up for everything =)
Glad to hear you liked them. And yay for the chapters to come. I'll have the first part of Yewook up the day after tomorrow so you can come back then.
No problem. I love writing and I love it when people enjoy my writing.
Thanks for reading <3
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Anyway, even though I don't really read YeWook or Hanchul, I would! Hehe since I'm curious to finding out the development in their relationship :3
I hope you'll update soon! Fighting! <3
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Omg typing using the phone sucks xD
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Thank yousssss!
I really tried to go for a strong relationship between Hannie, Yesungie and Hyukkie. To me they seemed like they belonged there together.
The reason I made a Wookie playboy is because I like to think that there's a reason for why Wookie acts so innocent all the time. There has to be a reason in my opinion and I thought, "Why not make Wookie a playboy and then he acts all sweet because that's how he gets people to fall for him." And that was how playboy Wookie was born.
I will update the day after tomorrow so hopefully you'll come back for that.
Thanks for the comment <3
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Yay!!
Thank you, but I really can't post it up in too many places since this is basically a Eunhae, so it has been up in the HyukHae community and miracle, but that's about as far as I can go with it. For the later chapters though, I'll have more pairings so, it'll be up there in other communities.
Glad you loved the fic.
Thank you for reading. Come back for Yewook, the day after tomorrow. =)
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Awesome fic btw. Can't wait for more~ ;)
Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks for commenting. =)
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Thank you for commenting. It means a lot to me. And I put up the second part to Yewook.
Hope you enjoy.
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And I hope that you will explain more of Eunhae's story though. It feels so... weird to have it end just like this ^^;; Or maybe you will put their story in the last project that you mentioned. I really don't mind with the long AU, especially if it's from a good writer like you :)
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Thank you so much.
Hope you come back for more.
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oh forgot to mention, i love your writing styles ^^
They were different in terms of upbringing. While Eunhyuk worked, Donghae probably just ordered his servants around. While Eunhyuk studied hard to get where he was, Donghae just asked his father for permission. While Eunhyuk could be kicked out at any time if he didn't do well, Donghae would be forever protected -- my favorite lines. idk why but i love them. i really do.
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Thanks again for the comment <3
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but yeah you won't leave us hanging like that right? ^^
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finally my day off and your cute fic was the first one i read and i could say that this is a good start ^^
I like this one, cute and sweet ahhhh beloved haehyuk is here heheheh
i like how you end their part
the future may not be sure for both of them and their relationship may not work but they are both willing to try and I'm sure it will be okay at the end...
thanks for this dear ^^
*hugs
continue writing
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Thank you the sweet comment and don't thank me i enjoy this and I thank you for taking time to comment. =)
Hope you come back for the next parts. There will be a lot more to come.
Thanks again. <3
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I read this so fast cuz I was enjoying every detail!:)) omoooo~ X3
Hae kissing randomly like that just turned me RED!!
And I didn’t comment on some chappies since it might annoy you!Looool~im really annoying aren’t i?!But its all your FAULT!your fics are addictive!:]]
Hahahah!! I will catch up with this and Yewook here I coooome!^^ sorry for being late & annoying again! :DD
Awwww <3 seems like many people commented on this one!:)) Yaaay! ♥
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*jumps up and down with joy*
It's okay. You can comment on as many chapters as you want and it won't bother me. Your comments could never annoy me EVER!
Yay for addictive fics. Wow, your comments really made my day. Awesome <3!!!!!!!!!
Yeah people seemed to like this chapter over that poor chapter that had no comments until I wrote one down.
But, thanks for commenting dear.
<333
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Kyaaaah---more like Yay for your addictive fics! ♥
Awwww ♥ Im glad i made your day,wonderful :)
Who wouldnt like this chapter i mean everymushy stuff imaginable is right here <3
Looool~there was a chapter like that? Hmmm~maybe your readers were too caught up in the story that they forgot to comment!:DD Just think that way! ♥
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Yes, I will. and psh you're super nicer than I am.
Mushy stuff, I have problems with mushy stuff. I write it a lot and you'll see that in future fics. But, yay for comments and conversations over comments.
I think this is my favorite chapter ever because of all the comments =)
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Naaaah~Im not nice.Just honest X3
^^♥ You still have more to come bb!:))
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omg~
that is so cute!
love it~! ^.^
good work~
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*jumps up and down*
Thanks so much dear. <333
Feel free to read all the other stories from this AU. There's Yewook and Hanchul too and then five more after those are done. =)
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Me=love you writting, keep the good work!
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"Yes I do." Eunhyuk said.
He said it!
Hankyung leaned his chin on Eunhyuk's shoulder. "I do want and I tend to want what's not good for me. But Donghae is not a bad choice. He's better than his friends. Better than hateful Heechul and seductive Ryeowook."
Donghae is... Donghae. He's adorable, and sometimes he seems ditzy but it's all Donghae~ 8D
"Hey! What about me? I feel left out." Yesung called.
Lmao, Yesung is always left out. -___- Not enough Yesung-centric fics with him being all cracky and lonely and omg I should go find and read one of those~
"Could Donghae possibly really, truly, honestly, want them to try this? Was the school's rich leader going to bow down to a scholarship student? Was Lee Donghae, the most sought after guy in the school, F3's leader, really going to do this? Was Eunhyuk that worth it?"
The last question kills me COME ON EUNHYUK SELF-CONFIDENCE YOU ARE HOOOOOT. VERY HOT.
"I don't think..." Eunhyuk started. "I don't think this is going to work out. I'm sorry. You should probably find someone else more suited to who you are."
OH JUST TRY IT TRY EUNHYUK TRY TO BE WITH DONGHAE.
AND THEY TRY OMG WILL READ THE NEXT FIC AFTER I BUY FOOD HOT BOYS MAKE ME HUNGRY.