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Add a colorful feather (Chp 1/5)
A/N: Thanks for your continuous support you guys. I will get back to each and every single comment on the previous stories, just felt like posting this up. Enjoy!
Eunhyuk still couldn’t believe he was in the school. He had never been exceptional at school. He’d done well sure, but the perfect student he wasn’t. He wasn’t like his best friend Hankyung who excelled at school and dancing.
All he Eunhyuk could do was dance and he was good at that. It had been his dancing that got him into the school. At least he wasn’t too different from his other best friend, Yesung.
Yesung wasn’t too good at school either, but he did have that voice that made him famous. The three of them had the talent.
Eunhyuk was the one who helped when they had trouble with dancing, even though he was mostly helping Yesung. Hankyung’s own style of dancing clashed too much with his own. Yesung was the one who provided that singing lessons and Hankyung stayed up too many nights to help them study.
And now they were here. The school was called SM University, after the SM entertainment company that owned the school. It was basically a school for rich children who thought they had talent. But, ever since parents started complaining, the school had started taking in more scholarship students.
That new rule had divided the school into those who got in because they had talent and those who paid their way in. This year had been tougher than the last few years. Only three scholarships had been given and that he had gotten in meant a lot to Eunhyuk.
“Eunhyuk!”
Eunhyuk turned around just as Yesung slammed into him. He was just righting himself when Hankyung jumped on him.
“Hyung, get off.” Eunhyuk muttered shoving off Hankyung.
“What is this? Aren’t you glad to see us or has getting into SM gotten to your head?” Hankyung asked helping Yesung up.
“No, but you’re going to ruin my uniform.” Eunhyuk complained.
“Oh no, the uniform!” Yesung exclaimed rushing over to dust Eunhyuk off.
“Stop Yesung. I’m fine.”
Yesung dropped his hands and Eunhyuk felt a stab of guilt at the hurt expression on Yesung’s face.
“I’m sorry.” He whispered.
“What’s wrong Eunhyuk?” Hankyung asked.
He sighed. There was no point in trying to explain. He shoved his hands in his pants and kicked at a rock on the floor.
“Eunhyuk? Hello?” Yesung said waiving his hand in front of Eunhyuk’s face.
“It’s nothing.”
“My dearest Monkey, there is something on your mind as your friend I feel the need to remind you that you cannot hide secrets from us.”
Eunhyuk stared open mouthed at Hankyung. “What was that?”
Hankyung shrugged. “I’m practicing.”
“You don’t need to practice.” Eunhyuk said even as his mood plummeted. “You’re perfect for this school and Yesung has those cheekbones.”
He trailed off and looked at his friends. Hankyung with the school uniform looked cool, not to mention his original good looks. His hyung was the type that could make anything look good and his smile had a similar effect on people as Yesung’s voice. Add to that his dancing and Hankyung was the perfect leader and he was modest to a fault.
Yesung with his short hair and high cheekbones would blend easily and with his voice, he would shine. Yesungie was sweet and kind and even though he did have a sort of weird tinge to him, it was just part of his charm, not to mention that he looked good in the almost tux like uniform they had to wear.
He, Eunhyuk, on the other hand had never been one of the good looking ones. He had always been the one in the back, the one that shone only because his friends did.
“Eunhyuk.” Hankyung said putting a hand on his shoulder. “What are you talking about? Who gave you the crazy idea that I was perfect for this school?”
“Well, you’re good looking, both of you are.”
“Ah, Eunhyuk, Eunhyuk, Eunhyuk, where did you get that low self-esteem from? You aren’t ugly.” Hankyung said shaking his head.
“No, he’s not. He’s pretty cute actually.” Yesung said scrutinizing Eunhyuk’s face. “I liked his face, don’t you Hankyung-sshi?”
“I do. I mean, if I weren’t so against dating anyone at the moment, I would have a go.”
“Aw, stop it Hankyung, you’re making him blush.” Yesung laughed.
Eunhyuk took a swing at them and missed.
“No fair Hankyung took martial arts all his life.” Eunhyuk complained.
“I didn’t.” Yesung intoned. “You’re just slow, Eunhyuk.”
Eunhyuk frowned. Her sighed and retrieved his bag from the floor. Even though his friends were teasing, he couldn’t help but feel a little better.
“And besides…” Hankyung said slinging an arm around Eunhyuk.
“…you can add colorful feather to a hen, but underneath it all, it’s still a hen.” Yesung finished coming over to Eunhyuk’s other side.
“And which are we?” Eunhyuk asked as they neared the doors to the large, very large, school grounds.
“We are the peacocks and these, my friend,” Hankyung said motioning to the students nearby. “These are the hens.”
A/N:So what did you think? COMMENTS ARE LOVED! :)
Eunhyuk still couldn’t believe he was in the school. He had never been exceptional at school. He’d done well sure, but the perfect student he wasn’t. He wasn’t like his best friend Hankyung who excelled at school and dancing.
All he Eunhyuk could do was dance and he was good at that. It had been his dancing that got him into the school. At least he wasn’t too different from his other best friend, Yesung.
Yesung wasn’t too good at school either, but he did have that voice that made him famous. The three of them had the talent.
Eunhyuk was the one who helped when they had trouble with dancing, even though he was mostly helping Yesung. Hankyung’s own style of dancing clashed too much with his own. Yesung was the one who provided that singing lessons and Hankyung stayed up too many nights to help them study.
And now they were here. The school was called SM University, after the SM entertainment company that owned the school. It was basically a school for rich children who thought they had talent. But, ever since parents started complaining, the school had started taking in more scholarship students.
That new rule had divided the school into those who got in because they had talent and those who paid their way in. This year had been tougher than the last few years. Only three scholarships had been given and that he had gotten in meant a lot to Eunhyuk.
“Eunhyuk!”
Eunhyuk turned around just as Yesung slammed into him. He was just righting himself when Hankyung jumped on him.
“Hyung, get off.” Eunhyuk muttered shoving off Hankyung.
“What is this? Aren’t you glad to see us or has getting into SM gotten to your head?” Hankyung asked helping Yesung up.
“No, but you’re going to ruin my uniform.” Eunhyuk complained.
“Oh no, the uniform!” Yesung exclaimed rushing over to dust Eunhyuk off.
“Stop Yesung. I’m fine.”
Yesung dropped his hands and Eunhyuk felt a stab of guilt at the hurt expression on Yesung’s face.
“I’m sorry.” He whispered.
“What’s wrong Eunhyuk?” Hankyung asked.
He sighed. There was no point in trying to explain. He shoved his hands in his pants and kicked at a rock on the floor.
“Eunhyuk? Hello?” Yesung said waiving his hand in front of Eunhyuk’s face.
“It’s nothing.”
“My dearest Monkey, there is something on your mind as your friend I feel the need to remind you that you cannot hide secrets from us.”
Eunhyuk stared open mouthed at Hankyung. “What was that?”
Hankyung shrugged. “I’m practicing.”
“You don’t need to practice.” Eunhyuk said even as his mood plummeted. “You’re perfect for this school and Yesung has those cheekbones.”
He trailed off and looked at his friends. Hankyung with the school uniform looked cool, not to mention his original good looks. His hyung was the type that could make anything look good and his smile had a similar effect on people as Yesung’s voice. Add to that his dancing and Hankyung was the perfect leader and he was modest to a fault.
Yesung with his short hair and high cheekbones would blend easily and with his voice, he would shine. Yesungie was sweet and kind and even though he did have a sort of weird tinge to him, it was just part of his charm, not to mention that he looked good in the almost tux like uniform they had to wear.
He, Eunhyuk, on the other hand had never been one of the good looking ones. He had always been the one in the back, the one that shone only because his friends did.
“Eunhyuk.” Hankyung said putting a hand on his shoulder. “What are you talking about? Who gave you the crazy idea that I was perfect for this school?”
“Well, you’re good looking, both of you are.”
“Ah, Eunhyuk, Eunhyuk, Eunhyuk, where did you get that low self-esteem from? You aren’t ugly.” Hankyung said shaking his head.
“No, he’s not. He’s pretty cute actually.” Yesung said scrutinizing Eunhyuk’s face. “I liked his face, don’t you Hankyung-sshi?”
“I do. I mean, if I weren’t so against dating anyone at the moment, I would have a go.”
“Aw, stop it Hankyung, you’re making him blush.” Yesung laughed.
Eunhyuk took a swing at them and missed.
“No fair Hankyung took martial arts all his life.” Eunhyuk complained.
“I didn’t.” Yesung intoned. “You’re just slow, Eunhyuk.”
Eunhyuk frowned. Her sighed and retrieved his bag from the floor. Even though his friends were teasing, he couldn’t help but feel a little better.
“And besides…” Hankyung said slinging an arm around Eunhyuk.
“…you can add colorful feather to a hen, but underneath it all, it’s still a hen.” Yesung finished coming over to Eunhyuk’s other side.
“And which are we?” Eunhyuk asked as they neared the doors to the large, very large, school grounds.
“We are the peacocks and these, my friend,” Hankyung said motioning to the students nearby. “These are the hens.”
A/N:So what did you think? COMMENTS ARE LOVED! :)
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i love friendship fics and these three are so cute♥
I WOULD HAVE A GO AT HYUK TOO \o/
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Their friendship is ♥ I wonder what you plan is for this story! ♥
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LOL this is exciting~
:D
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Glad to know it is exciting. Hope you like the story and the long one after it.
Thanks for commenting
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I am the worst number one fan evuuur! XP
I didn’t know you were starting a new AU fic! -_-‘
Aish~im slow like Hyukkie!:)) Hahah!
I just got back from hiatus since well…I sprained my leg so im stuck in bed all day!
Reading this just made me squirm! Omo~Y U HAZ LOW ESTEEM HYUKKIE?!
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Im gonna annoy you with all my comments in your fic!Hahaha~ ^^
Ive got a lot of catching up to do!:D
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Comment spam!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*hugs to death again*
Aww hope you feel better. Yes, I did start a new fic kind of. It's still the same title and under the same series but following different pairings. There will be more form this AU so come back.
Go comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
<3
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*gasps for air---hugs you back*
Awwww ♥ Thanks wonderful~Aigo -_-' I keep calling you that since i dont know your real name...My name is Mimoii btw--whats yours?! *this is such a weird time to introduce dont you think*?
Oh!^^♥ Im pretty sure ill love this fic cuz i already am in love with it <3 and i know many will too! ^_*
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Your comments don't bother me. I like them <333
*let's go so you can breathe*
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STILL I LOVE GENG'S AND EUNHYUK'S DANCING. LIKE, EVERYTHING IS SMOOTHER WITH EUNHYUK, BUT WHEN YOU WATCH HAN GENG, IT'S LIKE HE'S BREAKING THE DANCE INTO BITS AND PUTTING THEM TOGETHER WHILE DEFINING THE STEPS IN HIS WAY OH GOD THEY ARE AWESOME I CAN WATCH THEM FOREVER... Hold on, can I include Donghae and Shindong? 'Cause they dance awesomely too. Actually, you know what, I love Heechul's dancing. He's so dorky and I just love *ramble ramble ramble*
"he did have a sort of weird tinge to him"
WHICH IS ADORABLE HIHIHI.
"He, Eunhyuk, on the other hand had never been one of the good looking ones. He had always been the one in the back, the one that shone only because his friends did."
PUH-LEASE YOU ARE EUNHYUK YOU ARE. You just need to go around and wear cool clothes and the ladies will be all over you~ And did I mention that an awesome haircut can make all the difference? BEHOLD: http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/8862/0523youtheh2.jpg
HIHIHI PEACOOOOOCK.
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OMG!!!!!!!!!! *flails like mad* OH MY GAH!! I can't believe that you are reading this. This is my baby fic. This is the first AU that I ever wrote....(kind of since there is this other KyuSung AU with Hanchul but meh) this...I spent a huge part of my life on this XD I love this AU and dshafjlds YOU ARE READING IT <333333333333333333 *hugs you forever* *dances forever like a crazy person*
*loves rambling*
*Hugs you some more*
*is giddy with excitement*
I love you so so much <33333333333 and sjhdfjksdh yes yes yessssssssssssss Geng dancing and Eunhyuk dancing and Donghae dancing and Shindong dancing and HENRY's dancing and and sdjhfalskjhfdjks *rambles on too* <3
sdjfasj holy chirping birds! Eunhyuk is hot!!! XD
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I almost forgot - HENRY'S DANCING IS... asdfghjkl; I just... I love it. He can play the violin and then dance at the same time and Henry is so cool!
YES HE IS. :D
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This was one of my first ones so everything that comes after is better than this =\
But thanks so much <3
Also thanks to your friend who recommended this. ^^