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Add a Colorful Feather(Hanchul) 3/5
A/N: Hey there supporters =) I love you guys all for commenting and making me happy. Thanks so much for the comments and all the support. I love you all. Feel free to give suggestions and someone help please. I need inspiration for an Eunhae (or Haehyuk I don't know what to call it) fic I'm writing. Just you know, drop and Eunhae picture somewhere or something. I don't know guys I need inspiration of some sort. Help meee!!!!!!! Anyway here is chapter 3/5.
Hankyung stared after Heechul.
His brain didn't seem to want to register what had just happened. What the hell had happened? He shook his head to clear it and walked out of the studio.
That's what he got for trying to be nice.
He had promised Yesung and Eunhyuk that he would give the F3 boys a chance. He had spent the morning with Donghae working on some dances while Eunhyuk practiced singing with Yesung. He'd even gone as far as greeting Ryeowook in the afternoon. He was trying his best. It wasn't his fault that Ryeowook didn't like him either. He'd done his best, Yesung had told him so.
But now, this thing.
Heechul.
He'd stayed because no one else had noticed that the princess was sleeping. If he'd known what was going to happen, then he would have left Heechul there. Life knew he didn’t care. He could care less about what happened to Heechul. He didn’t wake him up because he was worried about what might happen to Heechul if he was left alone. He didn’t care that Heechul was probably going to have a sore back if he slept that way too long.
He didn’t care. He should have just left Heechul there.
"Why didn't you tell me!? What!? Did you think that it wouldn't bother me to find out from someone else!?"
Hankyung stopped. The voice sounded familiar even through the door. But in his current state of mind he couldn't quite place it. He stopped.
There was a muffled response and then the first voice started again.
"A friend!? They're all friends in the beginning! And I'm not so sure he knows that it's over! He's always around you. He never leaves you alone! You slept with him, damn it! You! Slept! With! Him!"
Hankyung's mouth dropped open. He recognized the voice. How he didn't realize sooner was beyond him. That was Ryeowook and if that was Ryeowook then Yesung was there too. He took a deep breath to control his sudden flood of anger and opened the door.
"Let me explain." Yesung was saying calmly.
"Yes. Explain!" Hankyung said slowly, quietly, but they heard.
Yesung's head snapped up. Hankyung watched Ryeowook's eyes narrow as they looked at each other. He could practically feel the hatred coming off in waves.
"Hankyung." Yesung said.
But, Hankyung wasn't listening. He walked to stand in front of Ryeowook. Their faces were inches from each other, but Hankyung was taller, his stance more imposing.
"I told you." he said slowly. "I warned you."
Hankyung watched Ryeowook's face. He was having an inner conflict. It would please him so much to beat Ryeowook to a pulp. But, on the other hand was Yesung.
"Come on." Hankyung said gently, taking Yesung's hand. "You don't need this."
"Let go of him!"
Hankyung turned just as Ryeowook jumped on him. They fell to the floor and Hankyung rolled them over so that he was on top. He pulled his hand back just as Ryeowook hit him in the stomach. At any other time, it might have made him pause, but he was too full of anger to care. He slammed his fist into Ryeowook's face as someone dragged him away. He struggled against who was holding him and broke free.
"Hankyung, stop! Please."
Yesung's scared, pleading voice broke through his anger. He stopped. Yesung had been holding him and Heechul was now holding Ryeowook.
"How can you tell me there's nothing after that?" Ryeowook almost pleaded.
Hankyung opened his mouth to deny everything, but Yesung shook his head.
"I have to say it." Yesung said even as the tears rolled down his cheeks. "Hankyung was once my lover. But, more than that, he's my friend. If you don't want-"
Yesung broke off. Hankyung watched the tears roll down his face and they broke his heart. He looked at Ryeowook who had tears of his own on his face.
"What?" Ryeowook asked moving to Yesung.
"If...if you can't accept Hankyung, if you can't understand that it's over between me and him, if you can't understand that I regret nothing that happened between us, then...then you're going to make me choose." Yesung turned his watery eyes on Ryeowook. "And, if I have to choose, I'll always choose him."
"Yesung." Ryeowook said his voice breaking.
Hankyung watched them. Ryeowook's arms cradled Yesung even though he was bleeding. Hankyung saw the way Yesung held on, as if the whole world were in Ryeowook's arms. And he had to do something.
"You don't have to choose." he said as his brain ran a million miles a minute.
"I don't?" Yesung asked his eyes pleading.
Nothing was ever about him. Everything was about Eunhyuk and Yesung. And right now Yesung needed him. He had to do whatever he could to take the pain out of Yesung's eyes
"You don't. Ryeowook doesn't have to worry." Hankyung said as an idea entered his head.
He looked over at the two in each other's arms. They belonged together. He still wasn't 100 percent convinced, but his former 0 was now an
85. And the odds weren't going to get better for anyone, not even Donghae.
"I want you to take care of each other." Hankyung said.
Ryeowook nodded. "Why don't we have to worry?"
"Because." Hankyung said straightening up. "Because, I'm in love with someone else. There can't be anything between Yesung and me because I…I’m in love with Heechul."
"What!?" three voices asked simultaneously.
Hankyung turned away from Yesung and Ryeowook's stunned expressions. He let out a breath as he neared Heechul who looked like someone had slapped him.
"Heechul-sshi." he breathed, praying that Yesung wouldn't question him. "I love you."
He took his opportunity and pressed his lips to Heechul's soft ones. He shut his eyes and tried to relax. He counted to five and started to pull away, but Heechul stopped him. He felt Heechul's hands in his hair, cradling his face as he deepened the kiss.
The irony wasn't lost on Hankyung as he tried, for Yesung's sake, to act natural. He knew he had to do something with his hands, but he couldn't bring himself to move them. And Heechul took over again.
Heechul's hand moved to intertwine itself with his hand. Hankyung finally moved his hand to Heechul's chest and broke their kiss. He turned away, but ended up looking at Yesung and Ryeowook. He ran a hand through his hair.
"See, Wook, nothing to worry about." Heechul said taking Hankyung's hand.
"No, nothing at all." he said as Heechul dragged him out of the room.
A/N: There you go guys. Please leave a comment.
Hankyung stared after Heechul.
His brain didn't seem to want to register what had just happened. What the hell had happened? He shook his head to clear it and walked out of the studio.
That's what he got for trying to be nice.
He had promised Yesung and Eunhyuk that he would give the F3 boys a chance. He had spent the morning with Donghae working on some dances while Eunhyuk practiced singing with Yesung. He'd even gone as far as greeting Ryeowook in the afternoon. He was trying his best. It wasn't his fault that Ryeowook didn't like him either. He'd done his best, Yesung had told him so.
But now, this thing.
Heechul.
He'd stayed because no one else had noticed that the princess was sleeping. If he'd known what was going to happen, then he would have left Heechul there. Life knew he didn’t care. He could care less about what happened to Heechul. He didn’t wake him up because he was worried about what might happen to Heechul if he was left alone. He didn’t care that Heechul was probably going to have a sore back if he slept that way too long.
He didn’t care. He should have just left Heechul there.
"Why didn't you tell me!? What!? Did you think that it wouldn't bother me to find out from someone else!?"
Hankyung stopped. The voice sounded familiar even through the door. But in his current state of mind he couldn't quite place it. He stopped.
There was a muffled response and then the first voice started again.
"A friend!? They're all friends in the beginning! And I'm not so sure he knows that it's over! He's always around you. He never leaves you alone! You slept with him, damn it! You! Slept! With! Him!"
Hankyung's mouth dropped open. He recognized the voice. How he didn't realize sooner was beyond him. That was Ryeowook and if that was Ryeowook then Yesung was there too. He took a deep breath to control his sudden flood of anger and opened the door.
"Let me explain." Yesung was saying calmly.
"Yes. Explain!" Hankyung said slowly, quietly, but they heard.
Yesung's head snapped up. Hankyung watched Ryeowook's eyes narrow as they looked at each other. He could practically feel the hatred coming off in waves.
"Hankyung." Yesung said.
But, Hankyung wasn't listening. He walked to stand in front of Ryeowook. Their faces were inches from each other, but Hankyung was taller, his stance more imposing.
"I told you." he said slowly. "I warned you."
Hankyung watched Ryeowook's face. He was having an inner conflict. It would please him so much to beat Ryeowook to a pulp. But, on the other hand was Yesung.
"Come on." Hankyung said gently, taking Yesung's hand. "You don't need this."
"Let go of him!"
Hankyung turned just as Ryeowook jumped on him. They fell to the floor and Hankyung rolled them over so that he was on top. He pulled his hand back just as Ryeowook hit him in the stomach. At any other time, it might have made him pause, but he was too full of anger to care. He slammed his fist into Ryeowook's face as someone dragged him away. He struggled against who was holding him and broke free.
"Hankyung, stop! Please."
Yesung's scared, pleading voice broke through his anger. He stopped. Yesung had been holding him and Heechul was now holding Ryeowook.
"How can you tell me there's nothing after that?" Ryeowook almost pleaded.
Hankyung opened his mouth to deny everything, but Yesung shook his head.
"I have to say it." Yesung said even as the tears rolled down his cheeks. "Hankyung was once my lover. But, more than that, he's my friend. If you don't want-"
Yesung broke off. Hankyung watched the tears roll down his face and they broke his heart. He looked at Ryeowook who had tears of his own on his face.
"What?" Ryeowook asked moving to Yesung.
"If...if you can't accept Hankyung, if you can't understand that it's over between me and him, if you can't understand that I regret nothing that happened between us, then...then you're going to make me choose." Yesung turned his watery eyes on Ryeowook. "And, if I have to choose, I'll always choose him."
"Yesung." Ryeowook said his voice breaking.
Hankyung watched them. Ryeowook's arms cradled Yesung even though he was bleeding. Hankyung saw the way Yesung held on, as if the whole world were in Ryeowook's arms. And he had to do something.
"You don't have to choose." he said as his brain ran a million miles a minute.
"I don't?" Yesung asked his eyes pleading.
Nothing was ever about him. Everything was about Eunhyuk and Yesung. And right now Yesung needed him. He had to do whatever he could to take the pain out of Yesung's eyes
"You don't. Ryeowook doesn't have to worry." Hankyung said as an idea entered his head.
He looked over at the two in each other's arms. They belonged together. He still wasn't 100 percent convinced, but his former 0 was now an
85. And the odds weren't going to get better for anyone, not even Donghae.
"I want you to take care of each other." Hankyung said.
Ryeowook nodded. "Why don't we have to worry?"
"Because." Hankyung said straightening up. "Because, I'm in love with someone else. There can't be anything between Yesung and me because I…I’m in love with Heechul."
"What!?" three voices asked simultaneously.
Hankyung turned away from Yesung and Ryeowook's stunned expressions. He let out a breath as he neared Heechul who looked like someone had slapped him.
"Heechul-sshi." he breathed, praying that Yesung wouldn't question him. "I love you."
He took his opportunity and pressed his lips to Heechul's soft ones. He shut his eyes and tried to relax. He counted to five and started to pull away, but Heechul stopped him. He felt Heechul's hands in his hair, cradling his face as he deepened the kiss.
The irony wasn't lost on Hankyung as he tried, for Yesung's sake, to act natural. He knew he had to do something with his hands, but he couldn't bring himself to move them. And Heechul took over again.
Heechul's hand moved to intertwine itself with his hand. Hankyung finally moved his hand to Heechul's chest and broke their kiss. He turned away, but ended up looking at Yesung and Ryeowook. He ran a hand through his hair.
"See, Wook, nothing to worry about." Heechul said taking Hankyung's hand.
"No, nothing at all." he said as Heechul dragged him out of the room.
A/N: There you go guys. Please leave a comment.
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Did Geng only do that to make YeWook believe they have nothing to worry about?or does it really have to do with him loving heechul?! Aigooo---i still think its the first one!
I mean Hangeng was far beyond ready to get over his denial~
But yea---i have to admit i LOL'ed when Geng confessed! Hahahh~
Just imagining there faces! ♥ XD
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YES!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was the reaction I wanted. Their faces. And yes of course it's the first one. Hannie isn't ready to be over his denial yet. There are still two more chapters so, nope not yet.
Super awesome thanks for the comment. I am really happy right now so sorry for any weirdness in this comment. It's sort of early or late where I'm at and I'm off to bed in like a minute, but I had to come comment on your comment.
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*rushes off to edit long fic*
Thanks for coming to comment. More tomorrow like always.
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Yea--i mean Heechul must have looked like he was hit or something and Yewook must have been shocked for the rest of their lives..but most of all HEECHULS REACTION! XD
Loool~You should always be happy dear..id be sad if you wont! <3
Awwww ♥ Thats great dear!:)) And its always my pleasure~
I might be late on the next fics though -_-' since my tests are next week but no matter I WILL STILL COMMENT ON IT!^^
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I have tests next next week, but since I already wrote a few chapters ahead, it won't be a problem when posting. So good luck and don't worry take your time. =D
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YOU!
yes YOU dear!
o.m.g.
you made my dream come true in one!
you've got two guys fighting over
Yehsung and even though I know
and it perfectly shows that
Hankyung's feelings are totally
of brotherly love - that is
just what I want. And it break
my heart but fell in love at the same time
when Ryeowook cradles Yehsung and
Yehsung cries and Heechul -
o.m.g. that confession for Heechul.
no matter how air full it is
that's still confession and even though
that's somehow using Heechul idc
because it seems to me Heechul
knew and they will end up HanChul anyway so.
these is how you made me spazz.
i don't usually comment long. <3s.
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My own spazz because I made you spazz. =DDDD
*hugs and never lets go*
Thank you so much dear. lol brotherly love, if only you knew.
sigh, i have to stop hinting at things, people will get angry at me. But, let's just say there's a HanSung fic (the back story before the Golden Boys) planned for the future (far future).
And i LOVE long comments so yaysssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yes, don't worry. Heechul knows and of course they will be HANCHUL because I have a super HANCHUL bias and a HAN GENG bias and because I can't keep them apart and yeah.
=D it's really early here so I'm sort of sleepy so sorry if this comment is weird. <3333
Come back tomorrow for the next part.
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<3 you so much for the update hehe
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Oh wells, it's okay. *hugs for comment*
I'm hugging everyone today =D
Thanks for commenting.
And yes, scary Wookie and his jealousy. At least that's what's going to get Hanchul together, hopefully. You'll just have to wait and see for the next chapter. I still haven't gone to sleep so this reply might sort of suck, but I love you for commenting. Glad you enjoyed the fic. Come back sooonnnnn
<3
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Jealous Wookie is scary O_____o He is punching Hankyung who is taller than him. But if this what makes Hankyung and Heechul to get together, I think I can bear to see more of Jealous Wookie on the side~ Just to make sure that Hankyung goes on the right direction (which mean into Heechul's heart~ lol)
So this is what you mean by Wookie crying? xD Actually this is the scene that I imagine will happen once Wookie confront Yesung about his past relationship with Hankyung. I'm totaly a mind reader!!! Mwuahahahaha *is proud of herself*
And forgive me for giving you long comment. I don't know why but lately I'm not able to control the words and keep on typing. Maybe this is because my teacher said that my English improve a lot and that I don't need too much correction (from my beta's mouth xD) when she proof-read my fanfic. Anyway, expect more long comments from me in the future! xD
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*gasp* You are a mind reader. And well, no one really gets any background on what Hankyung is feeling until much later, but let's just say, I wasn't exactly thinking brotherly love when I wrote this scene.
BUT, HANCHUL FOREVER, so Hankyung will end up in Heechul's arms or well whatever way you want to look at it, they will end up together. =)
As for Wookie, I felt super bad knowing that he was crying, but I felt like I had to put some angst there. My friend who read this hates too much angst so I guess in a way my fics are happier than I would have written them thanks to her.
But, again thanks for the super long comment *hugs*
And do come and your English is good. Can't wait for more. <3
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And I read your reply above, you say that there will be a fic that explain about Hankyung/Yesung past relationship? Wow, I'd totally love to read that! I hope that you can finish this series fast so that we can move to the next long fic one! *is demanding* xD
Kidding, kidding~ Just take your time :)
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I finished the long fic and this fic. I'm just waiting to upload them since I have to go back and read them and make sure that I didn't make any mistakes and I'll start the Hankyung/Yesung one soon so that it will be ready by the time the long fic is done.
It's okay to be demanding =D someone has to be so that I can go back there and write some more.
Hanchul!!
Please please please don't make Hankyung hurt Heechul...I have a MAJOR Hanchul bias (whats this I hear about a Hansung chapter??) It seems like Heechul already knows that he loves Hankyung, and now Hankyung is just going to tell him that he only kissed him for Yewook, and then Heechul will be sad! I'm worried! But reassured by the fact that this is a Hanchul fic and they will end up together (RIGHT?!?!) Ha sorry for my rambling...like I said, MAJOR Hanchul bias!
You are a really good writer! I can picture all their expressions so well! :-)
Re: Hanchul!!
*hugs and jumps up and down*
No, don't worry, this is Hanchul, so there won't be any Hansung here. I was planning to write the "before" story about Hankyung and Yesung's relationship and how they met Eunhyuk, but that will be later on if people want to read it.
But, don't worry. I have a hanchul bias too, so I can't hurt my bias. They'll end up together.
And don't worry, I do this all the time when I read a fic about Hanchul and things aren't going well for the two of them. This IS a Hanchul and we will have Hanchul, I promise.
Geng just needs time =) and of course there will be more Hanchul in the future, because they're my bias and I can't write anything without them being in there somewhere.
Thanks =) and come back soon (tomorrow) for the next part. And yay for silent readers who comment <3333333333
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Just found your LJ and started reading so sorry didnt leave any comments on the other chapters or fics... But seriously, what's up with hankyung? if it continues like this i feel like he's going to snap at one point later on and ask for something for himself, he's always so giving and selfless...
Anyways update soon! I'll following this fic.
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Hankyung has to be self giving because I don't know...I made him that way and then I felt bad for him...and then decided that that's how he is in this fic. And yeah...
Thanks for commenting =DDDDDDDD
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Glad to know you can't wait for the next part. It'll be up soon.
Come back for more =D
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If he really disliked Heechul, he could just ignore Heechul, really~ BUT HE DOES NOT :D
COME ON RYEOWOOK DON'T BE INSECURE.
GENG MEANS EVERYTHING, YES EVERYTHING HE REALLY DOES I SWEAR.