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rayaso ([personal profile] rayaso) wrote in [personal profile] static_abyss 2019-02-11 12:32 am (UTC)

This is such a wonderful snapshot of these two worlds! I loved the phrase "the cheekbones of a delinquent, angled for truancy and sharpened into weapons" -- it is so descriptive, as is much of your language. Excellent work!

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