Hey, I saw your comment but I haven't had time to get to it. I would appreciate feedback/concrit. I originally had a whole outline for this that was going to follow the gradual descent into despair as Adriana sought salvation. And it would have gradually flowed away from salvation all together as it focused more on how Adriana was coping. Leading, of coutsr, to a most glorious end where she would realize that she was unhappy and decide she was choosing Luz, and by extension, her own happiness.

But. I got a workload dumped on me at work and ran out of time and had to settle for an outline hinting at what I had originally planned.

Thanks for your comment and again, I'd appreciate any feedback.