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halfshellvenus ([personal profile] halfshellvenus) wrote in [personal profile] static_abyss 2018-12-11 08:17 am (UTC)

This was terrific-- and showed such contrast between these two characters and the lives they're leading.

Know that you can pass brings the pressure to actually do it. I liked how you showed Manuel straining to look as if he effortlessly 'belonged' in his weekday setting, while also fighting hard on the flip side not to become 'invisible' to the people of his own culture. What an uneasy tightrope dance of a way to live.

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